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[Forbidden Cavern Of Fears]

Meat locker.

Cold. Cold. Lost remains of humans hanging from the ceiling. Crude depictions of slaughter, written in the elegant ink that is fresh blood, lie smoking on the icy floor like graffiti on the side of a train car. Gray figures wander the void. Red eyes, no features to speak of, stark gray nightmares. They stand in motionless in perfect silence, waiting for my movement. I must hold still, yet their very being compels me to charge in for war as a martyr without cause. There is no logic behind the pure hatred towards or from those abominations, as if we exist to counteract each other. Spite flows through my veins, poisoning my blood. Can't be a pacifist, sick. It's making me sick. I move, I die. I stay, I die with a heavy heart.

Sorry, can't keep this one up any further. Good song...etc.
Rating: 5 (+ 0.0067)

punk7890 responds:

Thanks for your review!

[Distant Galaxy]

Go to your happy place.

Wouldn't it be something to remain here? Forever? No voices, no lies, no victims, no hypocrites, no bigotry, no scorn, no antagonists? No challenge to rise against, no enemies to strike down? Dreaming yet waking in a world of peace and solitude, broken free from those bonds that tied you on a leash to reality. Walking through a black landscape, enlightened. There is no more social anxiety, as there is no more society. There is no more paranoia, for who could plot against you? There is no more struggling to stay under the radar, as that dish lies unoccupied. No more living under a double standard that treats the disenchanted angel as a war criminal, no more double standards that treat the loner as a murderer. No more cultures that look upon intelligence as a taboo, no more cultures that smile upon their own idiocy. No more glorified con artists with power, no more rule under the boot of the usurpers. No more pretending like those kindhearted spirits are mere delusions, no more denying the illusion. No more loathing the village idiot that has became the idol, no more retaliation struck down by the shields of dense skulls. No more foreseen and fore-dreaded betrayals, no more trust to be cast away at the whim of the puppeteer. No more forsaken souls cast out into poverty, no more distant souls oblivious to my empathy. No more friends, no more family, no more enemies, no more rivalries.
Some call it Hell, some call it madness, others Purgatory, yet I...Heaven.

The one comment I have left that isn't fiction. Apologies are due if this reads as suicidal. That was not the intention.

Rating:5 (+ 0.0060)

punk7890 responds:

Thanks for your review! I enjoy reading them.

[- Horror Field -]

I'M NOT DEAD!

Double meaning. Surviving a battle, and it's been eons since I last posted a comment on anything here.

A lone warrior struggles from the wreckage of a downed Blackhawk. The sickening pain in his ribs was pushing him to suicidal thoughts. But as luck would have it, that temptation was denied. Every last bullet was spent saving that life that he sought to end. After finally moving a piece of the chopper's corpse from his would-be corpse, he crawled along the war torn ground. The air smelled of gasoline, of sulfur, of blood. Unidentifiable effigies of once proud soldiers lay scattered around as if 2012 struck. The corporal could not handle what he was seeing. He lived with those people, fought alongside those people, lived for those people. His demented cries fell upon deaf ears until the clock approached dusk. Soon, our disheartened corporal had company. He died with those people, he fought against those people, he died for those people.

Rating: 5 (+0.26)
Also, I sleep to ambient music. Pleasant dreams.

punk7890 responds:

Thanks for your review!

Who doesn't sleep to ambient music?

[Accordion of Death]

The one thing on my mind...

WOLOLOLOL! Nice little bit there. Insignificant review FTW.

Rating: 5
Current Score: 4.07 / 5.00 (+ 0.0094)

By the way, if you know the guy the song was about, he did some fucked up shit. Again, WOLOLOLOLOL!

Schleif responds:

ye, josef mengele was an... ehr, interesting character. glad you dig, haha \m/

[the Ætherized]

Just out of curiousity...

Was part of this inspired by 'Fabled Song'

If you look that up, and listen to the notes in the first electric guitar riff, you may see some similarities. I loved it though.

Rating: 5
Current Score: 4.23(+0.0073)

\m/

drumeaterking responds:

this wasn't really inspired for anything... thanks for your input!

[RC - Inst. Hardcore]

\m/_ (X_X) _\m/

Just plain cool. Yeah, I probably seem like a douche due to my lack of anything useful, but hell. I can honestly say that you might think hard about adding vox, because a lot of people, while they get accepted for vox by good musicians on here, usually downright suck. Now, don't get me wrong, there are a bunch of good vocalists here, but you might be a bit cautious bout it.

Also, Doom Gallion. That name is fucking awesome. _\m/

Rating: 5
Current Score: 4.30 (+0.0065)

CRF250 responds:

yeah, he likes it too.

Thanks for the input. We've got a singer, but no lyrics XD

[Beeeeeees!!]

...?

Okay...I know you always post comments pointing out the fact that you <3 booze, but man. How drunk were you? It is awesome, and the vocals are really lol-tastic.

Rating: 5
Current score: 3.86 (+0.0017)

GoreBastard responds:

Hahaarrr, believe it or not, I was pretty much 100% sober when I made this bad boy!!
Totally awesome to the WICKED EXTREME DUUUUUUUDE!!!!!!